Mountain+Journy+Character+scetch

Dave Conroy is head strong very persistent and kind of an idiot (too informal). In the story these traits made the difference between life and death for him. they made him make bad choices that led to his untimely demise. His Foolishness shows multiple times in the story when he does not head his own advice and risks his life so he could be warm one night earlier. For instance near the start of the story he says "...a man alone would travel too far..." and then he himself exceeds his inner boundaries and pays the ultimate price for it. Also when he is so close to safety his stupidity lets him stop and rest instead of continuing on. One might also infer that he is for better or in this case for worse quite persistent for long after his hands and feet are frozen he matches on attempting to get to safety. His most important quality is by far is head strongness. Through out the story he continues to believe that can keep going instead of stopping, he is so confident that he will not die if he goes on that he doesn't realize that he's frozen his hands and feet until long after he fell in the river. If he had noticed that he could have survived.

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